If there are only two lines in the city, you need to draw the rest of the city too.It was necessary to evenly fill the entire free area, use it as much as possible. I first painted the central streets, parks, exits from the subway, the river, the railway, and even the tram tracks. Then they added buildings.
Let's show some piece of the center straight honestly, with all the stuffing, including the Palace of Soviets, or whatever it is called, let's sign Independence Avenue, a park, so that it is interesting. And outside the center we will leave only the remaining stations.
Lines flow cool, but the meaning is not at all. People will stumble! Station need to sign large and clear railway to do.
At the transition you need a beautiful gradient.
The only round line of the Moscow Ring Road is knocked out. Poorly. Airplane is very small.
Parks, trees, river - buzz.And then I had an idea that became meaningful. If the shape as a whole does not seem beautiful, then you need to use a circle. Therefore, you need to completely redraw the city center so that it fits into the shape. I quickly put on a prototype and sent it to Ilya.
But in general, everything is formless. Half the area is empty. It is worth now to throw the maximum force on it. On the central island, you can clearly lose some of the space. Parks are signed very small. Empty quarters must somehow be filled with something else. Too many kinks at the river behind the center.
Half red tail is not signed. It seems that it is a week to go from Kupalovskaya to Pervomayskaya. I still soars the shadow that the island casts on the scheme. Maybe somehow do without it? The runoffs of the lines themselves are cool, but there is no point in them, and they look like kinks.
In general, the form does not seem beautiful, and the whole is more important than the details. This does not mean that the details are not important. It only means that if everything is fine with the details, but in general it does not work very well, then it does not roll :-)
You need to somehow squeeze or fill empty quarters. The central circle should look more or less evenly dense.I realized that the old city center will not survive, you need to redraw everything from scratch. To distribute the weight tightly, I drew a diagram in a notebook.
Circles in vain darker lines. We need a new font, this one does not roll. This metro logo is not very much acting better.
Border the circle must be removed, and the background outside it to make darker.
We must somehow squeeze the distance between October and Victory Square. At the same time get the intersection of the red and blue lines in the center of the circle.The same distances between the central stations and the intersection are exactly in the center ... It is necessary to redraw the center again. I gathered my strength, drew and showed a new prototype to Ilya:
It is strange that the color of the stops is different from the color of the lines. I would return hemp outside the circle for now.
It is necessary to figure out how to sign all stations on the left to the right of the lines. Moreover, I would even look at how it would look if the stations on the right were signed on the left. This will allow a denser format to fill.
The green line is hard to see above the park.
Parks must be made calmer. Especially where the green line is. Let's just do without a legend. Let's try to sign everything at once on the scheme.
We must understand that we will have something useful from below. Mode of operation? Rates?
What about the station symbols in the center. Now they are not visible, lost. Let's look again ...
The upper stations of the blue line near the circle want to write on the right.
The river can definitely be paler, it is now arguing with the lines.
Font contrast between central and off-center stations should be slightly higher or, conversely, not done. Now almost but not quite.
Oh, how dramatically better. Straight much better and cleaner. For the first time the feeling that “almost ready” :-) It usually leaves 50% of the time. Only the river should be lighter. The color of the buildings is weak. Can it somehow make black, not white? It can look spectacular.
By the way, we have to figure out where to put the princess from Monument Valley.
Inscriptions with transliteration recheck, everything jumps a little. The stops are now very pleasant in the center, and beyond it are completely different. In the schedule you need a long dash.
Can we try such a thing for fun? Only points are larger. Right so, of course, sucks, but I would look for the effect in this direction. I do not want a gradient, but something more graphical:
About fonts:
Dean Font
Font "Stem"
Font "Victory"
Font "Form"
Font P22 Underground
It is not obvious that "Square Yubileinaya" - the final station.
In translating it is not necessary to reduce Ploshcha. And replace subway with metro.
In the line captions, the word "line" is missing.
The star on Victory Square unpleasantly concerns the signature. It is necessary that nalezal stronger. And the bottom line is badly broken. Perhaps the circle should be made more transparent.
Purple color at the station is not the topic. It is better to make black, but larger.
It was cooler when the exit points were without “danger”.
Bus lines are invisible, they should be blacker.
"Lenin Square" move to the right, above, so as not to interfere with the towers.
Chizhovka Arena ... It seems from afar that this is a tank.
Does it seem like a shadow falls from the trees or something? It is not the same and it does not fall there like in 3D buildings. Need to make friends.
The island wants to sign somehow. And the river is somehow crooked, cartographically.
Ilya: Right to left, in any case, strange. In addition, you can deceive: cast a shadow down, and the left sides still make a bit lighter than the right.
Ilya: Tiny dots near the exits were more fun. Let's remove the icons at train stations. They are not beautiful. And the place around “Vokzalnaya” is the dirtiest. Something needs to be done there. Stations also belong to the same place where "Vokzalnaya".
Me: They really are so worth it!
Ilya: Maybe it’s somehow necessary at all to break a table that has arisen:
I: And do not sign the station?
Ilya: Vokzalnaya is already written, what is there to sign? You can make this icon green station. And near the station "Uruchye", the same blue big plane. And under it just a text to sign: “bus 300E to the airport”.
Me: But the metro station "Vokzalnaya" to the left of the station itself ...
Ilya: Hmm, and maybe somehow I can turn the signature to the left?
I: Immediately there is a blue line ... if only it is curved or directly on it to sign. Let's just sign it with words, it will be cleaner now. Then back to this issue.
In the alphabetical index, I would remove both indents and fatness of the first letters. And I want to use the "birds" as in my 2013 Moscow scheme. And for stations in the center, you can use the same circles as the designation of the outputs. Although ... fatness can survive, try. It is also better to endure it so that it is equal to the words in the group. It makes no sense to leave groups indivisible on one letter. This is an official piece, it is used by one passenger out of 1000. It should look like a background.
Think about where you can insert the signature of our names.
What decided the arenas?
Like pointer for now.
Let's throw all the forces now on the layout of the station names and the elevator and toilet icons. First, the right-justification of the next line is something forced. There should be a clear principle of alignment of icons. Secondly, it is not clear why they sometimes refer to Russian, sometimes to English inscription.
Furious area near the "Frunze". There and without dies everything is normally read.
The bus lines circle seems unjustified. You can just stump double. In two directions, as at the end stations of the metro line.
Let's go back to the piece around the "Vokzalnaya". All text about the station should be under the "Vokzalnaya". Need a green train icon, like an airport. Obviously, you need the place where the green line bends, move to the right-below. Then the station from it will stick out closer to the place where the station.
I would still look at this version again.
There are a few thoughts about the new branch. First, you can try to fill it with all the dots, it can be beautiful. Secondly, I would have made her a station of small size. So as not to interfere with us yet.
Signatures with our names I want to verticalize, reduce and put to the right of the circle, pressing to the edge of the format.
I want to be inspired by the valley of monuments more. We have cool houses and cool graphics for the scheme as a whole, and the trees are knocked out of it. It is possible to try generally to draw stupidly translucent spheres such as if it were air balloons. Look here:
"20 min from the center · 20 min from the center". Instead of "·" you need a man icon.
It's not very clear where the number 1 bus is coming from
Linear arrangement of trees on the street. Karl Marx and Bogdanovich infuriates.
"October" and "Kupalovskaya." That sucks aligned translit, want more to his left. Check out the rest.
Let's set the time in the schedule in a taftiansky way of writing. 5:30 am to 1:00 am
And what a thing in the center near the Palace of the Republic? Rectangle on the stick.
This is a screen in the square. A popular meeting place, local will understand.
There is a fear that the railway station icon looks like a steamer. Although graphically it is normal.
Trees have become steep, in my opinion.
A star near the obelisk on Victory Square wants a bit bigger.
Source: https://habr.com/ru/post/442854/
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