Plan presentation at a meeting of startups

I propose to create a plan according to which we will present our start-ups at subsequent meetings. I suggest here is an option.
1. Project Description
• overview of services
• what problem in the market do they solve?
• what users get
2. Monetization (how to earn / raise the value of the company)
• listing of monetization methods
3. Audience (who will be the main consumer of this project)
4. Competitors
• your competitors
• what is your competitive advantage compared to them
• Do you have any unfair competitive advantages?
5. Team
• key team members and briefly about their experience
6. Finance
• what is the current income
• how long was it reached and how fast did it grow
7. The need for investment
• how much is required for the development of the project - the total amount
• what services and how much money specifically for each service
• how long will the investment pay off?