Copywriting hackers

Recently I ordered several rewriting articles from a copywriter. The result is simply knocked down ... It's useless to tell, here are some excerpts:

According to its characteristics, houses from glued timber significantly exceed the brick or panel houses we are used to several times, they are durable, comfortable and environmentally friendly.

Houses have a unique look, even without applying special finishing works indoors.
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Houses built of wood talk about security and good taste of homeowners.

... is glued laminated timber, the manufacturing technology of which is much simpler and more practical than other building materials.

There are simple manufacturing techniques for laminated veneer lumber and are as follows.

For better density

Recently, glued laminated timber has been gaining popularity in the market for the construction of wooden houses.

The motor reducer, as a universal elements of the electric drive, find their application in almost all areas of industry

It’s sad ... It’s sad that everybody calls themselves a copywriter, considering that it’s enough to be able to put words into sentences. But in fact, copywriting is an art ... A professional copywriter should be able to hear the music of words and conduct them to create high-quality texts.

And then “for better density” ...

It's sad ...

Source: Marketing Blog